I like the heavy hour lines idea. The original graphic was made using uniform box borders so it'd be trickier, but certainly worth doing.
The vertical contraction was a mistake; I didn't review my construction carefully enough. I think the numbers-in-boxes would work better if the boxes were larger relative to the text size.
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Date: 2010-05-06 03:42 (UTC)The vertical contraction was a mistake; I didn't review my construction carefully enough. I think the numbers-in-boxes would work better if the boxes were larger relative to the text size.